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The Sickness

 
 
NNY
 
Reply Thu 29 May, 2003 12:46 am
Why must this one be different?
Why can't it be the rhythmic one?
The walls of my sanctuary ache,
I sit within suffocated,
- and yet isolated-
I am not well, for all I do is think,
and thinking induces pain,
pain inducing confusion,
confusion inducing despair...
Too much for the inside, not enough for the outside.
So called sanity just doesn't seem worth it.
Another stereotype taken as fact.
Thought is lost through the torture.
Oh morbid angels exalt in my destruction!
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jackie
 
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Reply Thu 29 May, 2003 06:43 am
NNY,

Your poetry made me believe you-


Powerful!
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morganwood
 
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Reply Thu 29 May, 2003 03:33 pm
For me, images of a past journey.
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NNY
 
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Reply Thu 29 May, 2003 04:48 pm
Thanks for your replies.
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NNY
 
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Reply Thu 18 Sep, 2003 11:09 pm
It was last on my "Your Posts" list and I wanted to see if I could get any more responses, isn't that pathetic?
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TangQuester
 
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Reply Thu 18 Sep, 2003 11:21 pm
"What are you doing, Nny?"

"Immortalizing the moment."
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NNY
 
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Reply Thu 18 Sep, 2003 11:40 pm
why are you quoting yourself?
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TangQuester
 
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Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 02:59 am
Quoting the comic book.
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NNY
 
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Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 01:58 pm
Holy ****, I'm ignorant.


That's cool, When he went to kill his lady because he never thought he could be that happy again.


I over analyze things a little obsessively I'm afraid.

oh well, great to see another vasquez fan.

Peace.
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TangQuester
 
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Reply Mon 22 Sep, 2003 01:22 am
I learned who Jhonen was through Zim, but I still think JTHM was his best comic book series. Haven't read 'em all, tho, so I can't say for sure.
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BoGoWo
 
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Reply Mon 22 Sep, 2003 08:11 am
"Look at that, neat, eh?"

"Oh, it's just a 'phase' he's going through."
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Oblivion
 
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Reply Mon 22 Sep, 2003 11:14 pm
I really liked it. You can feel the drive behind your writing and the reality of it. 5 thumbs up
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NNY
 
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Reply Mon 22 Sep, 2003 11:25 pm
Thanks alot. Welcome to A2k.
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