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Reply Sun 25 May, 2003 08:24 pm
Hello,

I look forward to reading the poems on the forum. I have only written about 10 poems before, but I really enjoy it. I


This Day will not Burn

Days are burned
As I painfully learn
Time is merely an illusion of my mind

Diving into blackness
An overwhelming burden on my back
I lock it in and am completely trapped

I drown and reach bottom
An evil face grins
I've finally been killed
By my own guilt and sin

Diving into the light
I reach bottom and find my ring
That symbolizes my engagement
To my Lord and King

This is the day that the Lord has made
I will rejoice and be glad in it

This day will not burn
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Rae
 
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Reply Sun 25 May, 2003 08:27 pm
Welcome to A2K, blondie! We look forward to seeing more of your poems!

Rae Very Happy
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Phoenix32890
 
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Reply Mon 26 May, 2003 06:32 am
Hi blondie- This is a great place to post your poetry! Welcome! Very Happy
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