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Trusting God

 
 
Rose
 
Reply Mon 17 Jul, 2006 01:10 pm
EDIT (Moderator): Moved to Original Writing from Sprituality & Religion


Trusting God for everything-


I found the last pages of a story untold,
How evil did stalk me so subtly, then bold;
While I was found traveling, a road unfamiliar
Did this monster come smiling and falsehood deliver.

So now in the valley of Love with my Lord,
My wisdom and strength are growing and heard.
These years of assault, streaked with tears and my blood
Fill the pages of my fearful story, a-flood...

How my ears will be cleansed, while my memory will hide
All the noise of the pounding in the change of the tide
Of the beat of the waves and the lock of the grip
Cause the channel of evil will finally slip.

Slip into the shadows, and on to the pits,
As time proves --
God is more powerful than evil's wits.
That which I do is what I don't wish
And that that HE wills- will my life enrich.
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The Sweet Desert
 
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Reply Wed 19 Jul, 2006 11:21 am
Re: Trusting God
Rose wrote:
EDIT (Moderator): Moved to Original Writing from Sprituality & Religion

Slip into the shadows, and on to the pits,
As time proves --
God is more powerful than evil's wits.
That which I do is what I don't wish
And that that HE wills- will my life enrich.


Rose,
Your last stanza is powerful...

Thanks for sharing




Regards,
The Sweet Desert
Najd, K.S.A
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Herema
 
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Reply Wed 19 Jul, 2006 04:56 pm
Rose....your words are powerful and so full of emotion. Unfortunately, I can connect with them and feel them as if I had written them.

Thank you for sharing

me agapi kai filia
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