Reply Tue 13 Jun, 2006 03:31 pm
Time


An god
An devil
An scale
An journey
An neverending story
A place where you can explore
make friends, and familes
A guide into the past or into the future
where you can fix old mistakes and make new ones
Forever changing and cultivalting with the beings living in it
Making things easy
Making things difficult
Having people asked questions
What do I do next?
What should I have done before
to catch my mistake before it was made?
What would have made that report better?
How do I get my best potential?
Do I have any potential?
Am I suppose to make it?
Or live like a bum
asking for quarters?
What do I like?
what do I dislike?
what do I want to become?
Do I know what I want to become?
Or is it something learned within time?
There it is again
The word
Time
what is it
Really?
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Reply Tue 13 Jun, 2006 04:21 pm
he he Laughing , I can tell you just graduated! All your "an's" btw should be "a's"...other than that its pretty good. I don't like the school one as much, it seems so idealistic...I prefer fantasy or realism though, so maybe thats just my personal opinion.
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