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the love story of six years old girl and boy

 
 
Reply Tue 13 Jun, 2006 01:41 am
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One day a little girl weared her most beautiful clothes, and looked
hurried to get somewhere. Somebody asked her where she's going. She
told that person seriously that she's going to find her fiance, and that they
would get married today. Then the kindhearted man sent her to the police,
out of concen for her safty. After a long time's asking in vain, the police told the little girl they would sent her to her fiance's house if she told them where he lived. Then when they arrived at the boy's house, the little guy was waiting anxiously for his "wife".

Lillte childen's love----you ever had the same expiences or ever imagined so?
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Chai
 
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Reply Tue 13 Jun, 2006 05:07 am
I think that's a very sweet story.
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Gargamel
 
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Reply Thu 15 Jun, 2006 10:23 pm
Was the "little guy" wearing a little tuxedo?

If so, this would be a marvelous story.
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Chai
 
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Reply Fri 16 Jun, 2006 04:32 am
Gargamel wrote:
Was the "little guy" wearing a little tuxedo?

If so, this would be a marvelous story.


Yes, indeed he was!

As he waited, he would nervously look at his little wristwatch, and put his hand in his little pocket to assure the little ring was still there.
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Gargamel
 
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Reply Fri 16 Jun, 2006 06:45 am
Chai Tea wrote:
Gargamel wrote:
Was the "little guy" wearing a little tuxedo?

If so, this would be a marvelous story.


Yes, indeed he was!

As he waited, he would nervously look at his little ****, and put his hand in his little pocket to assure the little ring was still there.


Thank goodness, it was there. Now they were certain to elope to Mexico, where he would bang the living Christ out of her.

THE END
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Chai
 
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Reply Fri 16 Jun, 2006 07:20 am
Wow, that ending was just like a Harlequin Romance....

I love you so much, I harlequin stand it.


http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/5/57/Harlekin_Columbine_Tivoli_Denmark.jpg/180px-Harlekin_Columbine_Tivoli_Denmark.jpg
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Gargamel
 
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Reply Fri 16 Jun, 2006 12:17 pm
Nyuk nyuk nyuk.
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Chai
 
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Reply Fri 16 Jun, 2006 12:21 pm
Inch by inch our love doth grow,
I feign would be thy escargot
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Blue Feather
 
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Reply Sat 5 Aug, 2006 08:06 am
Spell check!
It's nice...but the spelling disturbs me. I know that if ever on earth that you would even give a glance at my work (The sense of nonsense) because on my poem, my aim there is to create my own words like Carroll Lewis (autor of Alice in Wonderland) have done. but wrong spellings irritate me. please, when you post, check the spellings. that's all. bye.
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Chai
 
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Reply Sat 5 Aug, 2006 09:24 am
Re: Spell check!
Blue Feather wrote:
It's nice...but the spelling disturbs me. I know that if ever on earth that you would even give a glance at my work (The sense of nonsense) because on my poem, my aim there is to create my own words like Carroll Lewis (autor of Alice in Wonderland) have done. but wrong spellings irritate me. please, when you post, check the spellings. that's all. bye.


Hi Blue Feather, and welcome.

I think melody shine was one of "our" chinese students who were around quite a bit a little while back.

thus the spelling errors...many had limited use of the english language, and limited time at the computer we discover.

I think she did pretty well for a non native speaker.

The story just touches me.
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