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Thu 15 May, 2003 04:30 pm
I see a light in the sky
and I ask myself why?
is it I who must die?
I see a man in robes.
Avery thing gos slow
"You've thrown your life out the window"
"You've stepped on somany dreams to get to the top,
well now its time to stop"
"how...stop killing peoples hearts,
for a start"
"i will cart
your soul off to hell
so don't sell your soul
to hell"
"so go back down andstart new
just do
as i say
and hey
I hope you learnt something
just do these things
and you'll be king
of your own mind
and you will find
you'll start to unwind
so don't sell
your soul to hell.
I hope this doesn't sound mean, but I feel that if you are putting a poem on the board for comment then you should have taken enough care to have checked spelling and punctuation. After all, you should be proud of your poem and want us to see it at its very best.
I am just too dyslexic for that.It would take forever going through the spelling process as well.I try to correct occasionally and realize i am a reptile with limited abilties but i punch on fast and furiously with the word of confusion.
The last line above .....was to be with a world of confusion. But see how it worked out?
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