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Original poem renamed: 'Decline'

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Fri 8 Nov, 2002 08:20 pm


Decline


Organs betray me, honey bun,
Malfunctions big and small;
Last year they took my one,
and only place for storing gall.

I have a uro-doctor now,
(Admired by his peers)
And I have noticed -owww!
Hair, growing on the inside of my ears!

Ironically, on top my hair is thinner,
And, (to tell you this may be a little crass)
Every evening after eating dinner,
I soak my (upper) denture in a glass.

What's that my dear?
Oh love, the thing is worse than what I paint,

So I must disappoint you now I fear...
My joints are stiff tonight, but some thing ain't.
( 10-02 G.L.)
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sat 9 Nov, 2002 10:06 am
Disclaimer:

The above poem is not completely autobiographical. :wink:
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 10 Nov, 2002 01:42 pm
Embarrassed
Ain't it nice to be unable to eat
Simply 'cause you forgot where you left your teeth?
And ain't it a scream you can't read stuff
Simply cause your arms outstretched aren't long enough?
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jjorge
 
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Reply Mon 11 Nov, 2002 11:56 am
Edgar Very Happy
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jjorge
 
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Reply Mon 9 May, 2005 09:14 am
This poem has been modified slightly and re-titled.
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neologist
 
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Reply Mon 9 May, 2005 11:14 am
The first thing I experienced was loss of memory. Then, er, ah, what was I saying?
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theollady
 
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Reply Mon 9 May, 2005 06:17 pm
Very entertaining, jjorge Very Happy .
The writing, I mean. (Nothing amusing about losing the usage and/or the parts)
Great rhythym and words, I enjoy your work.

Ahem..... I have been here awhile, too. Embarrassed
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Tue 10 May, 2005 12:13 am
Amused me greatly
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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 10 May, 2005 08:42 am
Thanks for your comments neo T-O-L, and bek.


P.S.

Further Commentary On the Ongoing Discovery of Diminished Functions and Organ Decline:







Alas...

A lack
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theollady
 
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Reply Wed 11 May, 2005 06:50 am
jjorge Laughing Laughing Laughing
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