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Fadeing

 
 
tail88
 
Reply Wed 14 May, 2003 07:29 pm
It's a poem but can be a song because all a song is,is a poem put to words

A girls hopes begin to fade
As she see the plane aimed at the world trade
She crys
As it flys
In the sky
Her tears stain the ground
Her feelings are wound
For she is bound
To cry
As the plane flys
In the sky
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She knows this will kill her dad
And she gets so mad
That she pounds the ground
For she has found the true meaning of fear
To be able to do nothing but sit here
Then the plane hits the tower
An she begins to cower
She see the fire
And the flames go higher
She pounds the ground
For she has found
The true meaning of fear
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The tower begins to collapse
She had a memory lapse
Earlier that day she forgot to say
"I love you"
But now its through
She gets so mad
Because she forgot to say "I love you" to her dad
And now its all gone bad]
Right now she's so sad
The tears begin to flow
And the crys grow
Earlier that day
She forgot to say
I love you
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She screams at the sky
As tears run from her eyes
And she forgets all those lies
She told herself its not a dream
As a stream
Of tears run from her face
She thinks its a waste
For all them to die
Without a reason why
She thinks its a waste for them to die
without a reason why
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Her tears
So she stays
Her tears begin to go away
A rose for avery dead
But it must be red
To show the pain
Its so plain
Why did they do it,they have nothing to gain
Now all thats left is a stain
From the tears to her dad on the plain

Tail (to all those who died,and all those who help save the living)

Hope ya'll like it
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Verbal lee
 
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Reply Thu 15 May, 2003 08:36 am
Very thoughtful of you to pay tribute, tail88.

(except Fading, has the "e" dropped, which you can edit, if you like.)
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 15 May, 2003 10:55 am
tail88, It is quite obvious that you have felt what you have written. Welcome to A2K. and I hope we see more of your original thoughts.
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