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Should I dare to post my strange poetry?

 
 
Eclair
 
Reply Sun 4 Jun, 2006 06:24 am
ok, here are some of my not-so-good poems...


Thinking

It's funny to be thinking
Of a melody
And Die!

It's nice to listen
From time to time
The sound of Man
And Cry!

It's cold to feel
Pain in your eyes
And See!

It's strange to sense
The death
When you're alive
And Safe!

***



And he said:
When there are no woods, the fire will extinguish,
Like the snow in the summer and like rain in times of reapingÂ…
Like a broken tooth and a lumping leg,
You must be wise and shy of your own power
For there is no greater power than yours, my favorite creature,
My human!


***

We are the ones that never sleep
We are the ones whose grief runs deep
You're the one that made us laugh
You're the one that made us dream
Of the immortal ones
To the graceful ones
In the evening!

You are the one who made me stay
I was the one to make you pray
We were the ones who made you prey
For our lust!

I was the one that set you free
From our chains of melody
But they were the ones that tormented me
Into abyss they imprisoned me!
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 4 Jun, 2006 06:46 am
You have a very good way with words. I would encourage you to write and post often.
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Eclair
 
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Reply Sun 4 Jun, 2006 12:58 pm
Oh, thanks...

here comes another so-called poetry..

So boem and pure
You were, my dear!
So cold and icy looking
You stayed, my dear!
Oh, but how marvelous this was
Your life, my dear!
So nice and sweet and dead!
You are, my dear!

***

we cry, we laugh
we stay and watch
The sky above, the earth beneath.
we swim trough fire
we play with love
we idly listen
the sound of freedom
we have the power
in our grasps
to come and steal your soul
we're angels...we're demons
We see trough darkness...we dim the lights...
We praise for God and lure for evil
We're fancy with no moral codes...
We're angels...but are we really demons?
We have no regrets, nor fears
We create, yet, we destroy
We give birth and raise
To death and life...'cause it's the same.
We have known the truth
But we told you lies.
This is fun
For youÂ…destructionÂ….
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