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Tenderness

 
 
Eclair
 
Reply Sat 3 Jun, 2006 06:30 pm
I am new here, but I thought I should give it a try...



Cap.1 - Rendezvous

- Why are you whispering? Why?
They were standing in the pouring rain, her dark hair falling against his leather black coat. Her eyes looked heavy, full of warm tears.
- And why would you come to me tonight?
- Hush, my love. He said.
He pressed his own body against heir's with a greater force, making her feel pain inside her every bone.
- I feel…I feel like I want to hurt you, my life, but I realized this past nights…that I've already hurt you. You can't bear anymore.
The girl wasn't moving, despise the pain that she was feeling. She knew that being in her lover's arms was more important, not her body breaking under his strength. She wasn't paying attention to that.
Finally, he released her and she let a little gasp coming outside of her mouth.
He grabbed her hands and he sank his face in them, kissing them slowly with his lips.
- I thought you were gone, my life. She said, looking sad upon him, hardly trying to send a warm smile to the man that meant everything to her.
He, then, raised his grey eyes to her, watching her with the most passionate look and he embraced her once more.
- You well know, my dear, that I will never leave you. Not you, my life, the one that gave me a chance to life.
- Then why? Why do you say you wanted to hurt me?
- Oh, my ageless passion, I thought I can revenge myself. I thought I could revenge my family. But my love is too strong for it. Not even the deaths that you have brought upon me all these long years could stop my feelings.
The girl stepped away from him, looking at him frightened and confuse.
- Me? What deaths?
- Oh, my dear…you don't know these things. You don't remember them.
He grabbed her hands again, drawing her closer to him and he pressed his lips over heirs.
- Now, my life, don't be confuse. When the time comes, I am going to tell you everything about it. It was not your fault. Now I see it.
- But what does that mean? I don't understand, my love. What are you trying to say?
- I'm so sorry, my angel. I didn't want you to find out about this. I'm just saying this: I have forgiven you and my feelings for you are only getting stronger.
- But I don't understand…
- You don't have to! Not now. We only have moments in our lives, and this is one that I truly cherish. Let's get inside. It's raining and I'm starting to feel cold.
- Of course.
They entered her house where the lights were gone. Absolute darkness.
- My angel, this is a moment…
He draw her close and kissed her soft neck.
- …that I TRULLY cherish…
Only their hearts beating one against the other, only their eyes searching for each other's face, only their lips reuniting endlessly…they only had moments, but that one was eternal.



If you liked it, then please, tel me, just so I can add the next chapters..ok?
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