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Write a poem using these words.

 
 
Diane
 
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Reply Sun 18 May, 2003 01:44 pm
Raggedyaggie, wonderful!! Very Happy

Poor guy won't be able to hang ten anymore. Confused

Here are more words, if anyone would like to continue.

Buy Ocean Cleaners Conscience Idea
Retriever Hospital Brush Loud Hymn
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Raggedyaggie
 
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Reply Mon 19 May, 2003 06:33 am
Oh, goodie, more words. Very Happy

On the radio a loud hymn was playing
In the hospital room where I'm staying.
I felt a twinge of conscience.
Then said, "Just skip this nonsense,
When you're billed, you'll do plenty of praying".

My retriever chews his brush everytime I'm away,
And I'll be sent to the cleaners if I'm here one more day.
So I have an idea, a really great notion.
I'll buy a hideaway on a hill near the ocean
If I can just sneak out of here without having to pay.
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Diane
 
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Reply Mon 19 May, 2003 08:44 pm
Oh, you ARE good!

I've been remiss, but with my sons here, I've been busy doing fun things like sightseeing and going out to eat and yakking for hours at a time. You've inspired me to get busy. I'll try to have something by tomorrow.
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Raggedyaggie
 
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Reply Tue 20 May, 2003 08:23 am
Thank you, Diane. Your visit with your sons sounds wonderful. Enjoy every minute. Laughing
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fbaezer
 
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Reply Tue 20 May, 2003 10:40 am
Hospital nights found you
unraveling the cleaners' work:

Your conscience had searched the depths
of a dark, unfinished, ocean.
It is now a hymn to Hypnos.

Loud programming was Mephisto:
with his brush he swiped the motion
of every dangerous idea.

A retriever he was,
and forced you to buy his bounty.
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 20 May, 2003 11:41 am
fbaezer, Mephisto--hypnos--necromancer:

That was haunting, so I think I'll try your two, and then add the third.

From the gordian knot of the jungle,
She hacked her way through the carnivorous vines
In step with hypnos of the altered mind.

On one foot a sandal, the other a slipper
To find a new dancer,
A necromancer.

On one arm a stream of gold, the other plaited leather,
To stroke alabaster,
And basalt's disaster.
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jackie
 
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Reply Wed 21 May, 2003 05:52 pm



They tried to buy my conscience,guys-
To them, a good idea.
For me, a brush with common sense-
Said: 'throw it off the pier'!

I sang a loud hymn, running-
Away from ocean's wake.
For I'm a good retriever, man
Of all they tried to take.

Down by the shops and hospital,
I move with constant speed.
Then over by the cleaner's shop-
I'm in my door and key'd.

ahhhhhhhh....home! Smile
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Letty
 
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Reply Wed 21 May, 2003 06:43 pm
Jacke, WOW! and I mean WOW...girl, where you been hidin' these talents. Under a bushel (whatever that means) Smile
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jackie
 
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Reply Wed 21 May, 2003 08:19 pm
Aw, Letty Embarrassed Embarrassed

You're too nice!

You are the one with the 'hundred dollar' words and fantastic talents.
(A guy I know, always calls any vocabulary word longer than a six letters, too expensive for him). Sometimes they cost me a few hours in the lexicon!
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Diane
 
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Reply Wed 21 May, 2003 09:00 pm
Honest, I really haven't had time and it's not getting any better!!

Tomorrow I leave for Colorado and then New Mexico for the Albuquerque gathering, then back to CO for a couple of weeks visiting relatives. I doubt I'll have access to a computer during that time (maybe at a library).

Raggedyaggie, I think you inspired the rest to be at their creative best! Fbaezer, yours was beartifully dark and mysterious, followed by the one and only Letty, with her related exploration of the classics and dark mystery, then Jackie and her race to save her conscience--whew!!!

Please continue. I will try to post sometime, if possible, but feel free to add more words for the next challenge. Letty, why don't you be the one to provide the next ten words?
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Butrflynet
 
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Reply Mon 2 Apr, 2012 02:37 pm
Looks like it is Diane's turn to write the next poem.
Diane
 
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Reply Mon 2 Apr, 2012 09:56 pm
@Butrflynet,
Ah, butrflynet, that trip was when I met dyslexia in person and things were never the same. I'm not sure I have any words anymore.
fbaezer
 
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Reply Tue 3 Apr, 2012 09:46 am
@Diane,
Diane wrote:

I'm not sure I have any words anymore.


Go search them, Diane!
They do exist.
Kisses.
Diane
 
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Reply Tue 3 Apr, 2012 11:29 am
@fbaezer,
Kisses back, fbaezer. With your encouagement, I'll give it a try.
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