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my poem - what do ya think

 
 
Reply Thu 1 Jun, 2006 11:03 pm
devotion of deathly desire , a whisper of forbbiden secret
lonliness of shadowed corridor , shrouded in mist and decay a footstep of hope in a sea souls , in intwisted fears and intwined in lies
a tear of ruin , rapture of sorrow , intailed in the dusty memory of outlawed lust , and drama combined
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Reply Thu 1 Jun, 2006 11:21 pm
nxt
angels gather at my head ,my fate met
not destined longer for mortal soul
the void in my chest , ever flowing
in darkness and numbness
the shadow of him looms over me
my life dripping onto despairing leaves
slayed by the scythe of my faith in you
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