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WICKED POEM BY ME

 
 
spitza
 
Reply Thu 25 May, 2006 03:50 am
ROSES R RED VIOLETS R BLUE
SUGAR IS SWEET JUS LYK U NOTT!!!!! more lyk MEEEE!!!!yez yez bruv

bes not beef me
u dnt wanna c me
ill make u run lyk d 200 EAZY!!!!!
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Lord Ellpus
 
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Reply Thu 25 May, 2006 04:10 am
Thank you. We're all refreshed and challenged by your unique point of view.
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material girl
 
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Reply Thu 25 May, 2006 04:18 am
Im also challenged in understanding who teaches you spelling!!
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detano inipo
 
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Reply Thu 25 May, 2006 06:40 am
Roses are red and violets are blue.
You're schizophrenic and so are you.
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spitza
 
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Reply Fri 26 May, 2006 10:50 am
sori
well first i am kind of 14 and i talk slang i thought you lot knew how to read it and second yee my poem is really good thanks for telling me
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Setanta
 
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Reply Fri 26 May, 2006 10:52 am
"Kind of 14" . . . does that mean you wish you were 14?

Your "poem" sucks. So does your orthography. Which is not to say that we are not entertained--simply that you'll likely not understand why until you've progress considerably past 14.
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spitza
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 07:55 am
woteva
ur a loser m8 get a life when ur my ages itz about rapping not ur junk
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Setanta
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 09:14 am
As rap, your poem sucks . . .
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material girl
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 09:36 am
Re: sori
spitza wrote:
and second yee


So you speak 15th century slang?
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tin sword arthur
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 09:46 am
Boy, times have certainly changed. It's been over a decade since I was fourteen, but we knew how to spell and form coherent thoughts.
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makemeshiver33
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 09:50 am
My Momma would have slapped me silly for talking like that.

What happened to speaking plain english?
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tin sword arthur
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 09:51 am
Apparently, when you are 14 you don't have time to type anything properly. And he's doing what he calls "rapping", so I guess that means bad english is not only allowed but encouraged.
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Phoenix32890
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 10:01 am
It has a certain "je ne sais quoi". The poem reminds me of the paintings that are made by elephants. No, actually, those paintings are pretty good.

http://www.elephantartgallery.com/paintings/

spitza - Don't quit your day job, yet! Sad
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material girl
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 10:02 am
Its not cool to be eloquent.
One has to say wha'ever to be respected by ones peers.
Or they may get dissed.
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tin sword arthur
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 10:05 am
material girl wrote:
Its not cool to be eloquent.
One has to say wha'ever to be respected by ones peers.
Or they may get dissed.


Oops, I forgot about this immutable truth. The less coherent the better. Alright. Ihernag asfhemm a asher aemef mgl;gpls. There, I should now be the coolest person on this thread.
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makemeshiver33
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 10:15 am
Arthurway, ouyay andway Iway..e'zway ebay okin'smay ogethertay!
Oyay Ohay Anmay, e'zway e'zbay ethay oolestcay inway aday oodhay
, ingin'slay aday itshay atway illay unkpay assesway ikelay
itzaspay! Andway aday ottanay onnagay understandway away omay
ofay ang'thay...

Ordway upway obray!
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Phoenix32890
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 10:20 am
In the same intellectual genre:

Quote:
Mairzy doats and dozy doats and liddle lamzy divey
A kiddley divey too, wouldn't you?
Yes! Mairzy doats and dozy doats and liddle lamzy divey
A kiddley divey too, wouldn't you?
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tin sword arthur
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 10:22 am
makemeshiver33 wrote:
Arthurway, ouyay andway Iway..e'zway ebay okin'smay ogethertay!
Oyay Ohay Anmay, e'zway e'zbay ethay oolestcay inway aday oodhay
, ingin'slay aday itshay atway illay unkpay assesway ikelay
itzaspay! Andway aday ottanay onnagay understandway away omay
ofay ang'thay...

Ordway upway obray!


Laughing
Took me an awful long time to decipher, though. Reading pig latin is a pain in assway.
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makemeshiver33
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 10:33 am
:wink:
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CharlieRipton
 
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Reply Fri 2 Jun, 2006 03:38 pm
This is pretty bad you guys. Terrible Rap and Pig Latin. I posted two stories (Bridge & Three Doors Clearing) and haven't gotten a reply. Does it take a bad writer to get responses or what! Then again his poem was small, so maybe thats it.
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