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beneath the towel

 
 
Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 02:54 pm
He stood there glistening
A broad chest smelling like soap
Smiling at me in my own house
Towel draped low on his hips
I could see defined arms and blonde hairs
Traveling downwards from his navel
The towel stopped my wandering wondering eyes

Now every time I lie in the bath
I glance over at the shower
And can just about make him out
Naked in the steam
Then I smile at the softly hissing bubbles.
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Lord Ellpus
 
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Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 03:28 pm
You forgot to mention my bobbly bits.
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blacksmithn
 
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Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 04:02 pm
Of course not. What rhymes with bobbly bits?
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CalamityJane
 
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Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 04:18 pm
ti.... oh, maybe not..... Wink
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blacksmithn
 
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Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 04:23 pm
Mmm-hmm! You see the dilemma?
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CalamityJane
 
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Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 04:25 pm
Yeah, it's like puttin' on the ritz with the bits Wink
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spendius
 
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Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 06:21 pm
Quote:
What rhymes with bobbly bits?


Wobbly tits.

Jobbly clits.(Or vice versa)

Sobbly fits.

Snobbly gits.
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blacksmithn
 
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Reply Thu 20 Apr, 2006 07:25 pm
So literal and yet so humorless....
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spendius
 
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Reply Fri 21 Apr, 2006 05:38 am
Well-we can't all have a po face.
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tagged lyricist
 
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Reply Sat 22 Apr, 2006 02:44 am
sorry Lord E
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