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'Posie' (Notes To J.D., 5-01-03)

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Thu 1 May, 2003 10:53 am
This poem is for my friend who is having surgery today.


'Posie'
(Notes to J.D., 5-01-03)


Tall, and strong,
A very curious
kind of flower,
that will not wilt
with just the sweetness
of an hour;

You wilt not,
Though winds
and storm would
have you cower,
Battered, yes. . .
but standing,
like a beacon tower.
(jjorge)
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 2 May, 2003 10:05 am
jjorge,

With such a loving tribute, how could things not go right for J.D.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 2 May, 2003 12:07 pm
Thanks Letty

I wrote the poem to cheer her at a time when she is indeed being battered.

I think it helped.
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 2 May, 2003 12:14 pm
jjorge, anytime I write poetry, it's for the same reasons. A need for me to say; a need for others to hear.
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Diane
 
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Reply Fri 2 May, 2003 03:34 pm
Jjorge, your poem would be meaningful and welcome to anyone is a rough situation. I hope things work out for her.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 2 May, 2003 05:27 pm
Diane

Thanks.
She's a wonderful, courageous person who has always been strong for others. If anyone deserves a break she does.
She emailed me today after reading the poem. I guess it did help her to feel better.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 16 May, 2003 08:44 am
Addendum:

My friend has been back to work for a week. She's doing well.
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sozobe
 
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Reply Fri 16 May, 2003 08:56 am
Letty wrote:
jjorge, anytime I write poetry, it's for the same reasons. A need for me to say; a need for others to hear.


Ooh, nice, Letty. Just so.

Lovely poem jjorge, and glad your friend is doing well!
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 16 May, 2003 09:55 am
Thanks Soz.

(it's the same friend I was shivering with last night)
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sozobe
 
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Reply Fri 16 May, 2003 12:15 pm
Oh! Poems work wonders, my friend.
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Diane
 
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Reply Fri 16 May, 2003 07:31 pm
Jjorge, thanks for letting us know how your friend is doing. Did you read your poem to her?
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sat 17 May, 2003 12:41 am
Hi Diane,

Thanks for your interest.
I Shared it with her but I didn't read it to her. It seemed to make her feel better.
jjorge
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sozobe
 
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Reply Sat 17 May, 2003 08:15 am
Smile I'm sure it made her feel much better.
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