Advice?

I've seen effective spacing-- the vignette set apart by different tabs...the reader knows something significant is happening--then a sentence ot two into the scene, there should be a sense of change of place or time. Do you have a snippet of the place in the story where the change should occur?

Like this. The regular part of the story is up there,
and the flashback is here on this type of Like this. The regular
part of the story is up there, and the flashback is here on this
type of


There are other ways that rely completely on writing skills. I'll try to help, but I'd need an idea of what you're writing.

No, but I know when I am going to put it in. I just wrote the basic part of the prologue, but I am writing it pretty fast. I might have it by tomarrow, but I am not sure.

The spacing didn't work properly in my previous post.

The flashback was supposed to be indented about ten spaces...

If you want to e-mail it to me (if you don't want to show it on the web for copyright protection), I wouldn't mind. Otherwise, here is fine.

<Of course, I would have to e-mail it to Rog, as he is interested in the plot, as well. >

Thanks, Lash, but I'm more interested in the finished product.

Lash, Spaces do not work on a2k. You must include dots or dashes to separate words or sentences. No matter how many spaces are made on composition, a2k will reduce it to one space.

CI-- I should have remembered that. I've tried to do spacing before. Forgot.

OK, Rog.

Sometimes the use a couple of astrisks to note a passage of time from what's above to what's below. Might that work for a flashback?

You can also consider italics or a softer grey font indented about one inch from the left margin.

Alright, thanks cicerone.