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Original Poem: 'To BFS'

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jjorge
 
Reply Sun 19 Feb, 2006 04:53 pm
To BFS


Our paths may cross some of these days
in search of separate yearnings,
Yours to the strand and crashing waves,
and mine to mountain turning,

who can fathom our desires?
So deep...... beyond discerning,
Each seeks a different paradise
or new, or a returning.
-jjorge
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aidan
 
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Reply Mon 20 Feb, 2006 04:48 am
This is beautiful-so simply stated-really beautiful.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Mon 20 Feb, 2006 12:46 pm
Thanks for giving Aidan comfort...
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