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Fold Me Hold Me hehe please reply

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MisterEThoughts
 
Reply Sat 26 Apr, 2003 11:11 pm
Fold Me

fold me,hold me
like a dove
kiss me, miss me
when I'm near
touch me, touch me
while I live
Don't wait untill I die, my love

gently,softly
like a prayer
tuck me, send me
hold my hand
call me, hear me
from above
defend me when I fall in love
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jackie
 
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Reply Sun 27 Apr, 2003 12:47 pm
MisterEThoughts,

I cannot "fold" you and I sure can't "hold" you,
But your rhyme is fine, now- at least
I have "TOLD" you!

Hope you are having a great weekend.
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MisterEThoughts
 
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Reply Sat 29 Nov, 2003 03:51 am
haha thanks jackie that was cute hahahahhahahaa
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