Check out this song i wrote

I used to have everything, then everything crumbled
Just like a wrestler falling out of the ring in the royal rumble
Confidence was gone, hope was lost
Whatever happened to my dreams ?
Did they melt like ice creams ?
Hope it wasn't hagen dazz, at least it isn't sars
I cannot believe my eyes
What I'm seeing are not mine
I began to to doubt myself
Whatever happened to my brain cells
Immediately i seeked help
They gave me tranxene
What the hell was that
Who cares, I was back
Raising hell like before
Talking to b**ches I didn't dare to even call
B**ches came & went
They vanished in a van
Peugeout ?
I dun't think so
They could not even afford a yoyo !
I dun't mean to discriminate women
Some are just after my semen
I dun't mean to go this far
This isn't a war
At least it isn't a bore
Maybe I'm getting a wh*re.
At least they are at the back of my call
Baby, dun't forget me
Come again, make me excited
I know its not fair
Be patient, you'll get your share
The last 4 sentences may not be clear
Think dirty and you'll be sure........

wats the rating upon 10?