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Wed 25 Jan, 2006 10:37 am
Hurt Pride
One day they'll realize, there was a heart inside,
A heart that held many virtues and pride,
A heart that couldn't back down from a fight,
Until it was shaken and beaten with fright
A heart that hated crying so much,
But cried so easily, when a soft spot was touched,
A heart that was in, a person so meek,
That other's assumed, was lowly and weak
But one day they'll know, this person did cry
And she kept on crying, till the day she died
Let me know what you think
I really like the first half. The second half seems a little forced, but overall I like it. Post some more! Welcome to a2k!
hurt pride poem
liked the poem very much. poem not forced, no, but writer seems extremely sad at the end. really broken-hearted. ok about that, but how about working the poem some more and resolving his dilemma one way or another.
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