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Fourth of July

 
 
Reply Mon 16 Jan, 2006 07:38 pm
Hi there

This one needs some work, I put it together in about 10 minutes so needs fine tuning but its my first attempt at a 'political' style song. Be interested to know what you think.

4TH JULY

In our great nation we are free
At least to some degree
But other places need our aid
We can't just leave them be

On the 4th of July
I'd be with friends of mine
We'd hold our banners high
But now the 4th of July
Is not a friend of mine
We're slaves but we don't mind

If I see red you'll lock me in
Though I don't see my sin
And once I'm out you'll keep me there
And never let me in

On the 4th of July
I'd be with friends of mine
We'd hold our banners high
But now the 4th of July
Is not a friend of mine
We're slaves but we don't mind

Where's your 4th of July (x4)
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