Going Down In Flames

I've got no critique. I think this is your best yet RG7. The words fit together and there aren't any forced rhymes that I can see. Also, the anticipation in the beginning and the pain in the end both come through very well.
Great write.

I can hear it playing now...sounds good.

^thanx. i like those parts about it, but im gonna have to make changes to how i word everything, so sum lines will b shorter...