1
   

to johanna

 
 
Reply Wed 4 Jan, 2006 09:45 pm
im sitting at my brothers desk
a patchwork of utilities gathered in this
technocratic nativity

a temple of circuits guiding
the simple speeches of numbers.
the halo enthroned in caves and silica
a valley crouched in sleep
spitting seeds of fire.

i see that blue canvas entrenched above us
like an oil painting
the clouds painted by the oceans careful fingers
a stroke of white trees cuts through my vision
the crows are falling
to the field like ash
a slow black descent
only
to
rise
to fall again.
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 603 • Replies: 2
No top replies

 
CrazyDiamond
 
  1  
Reply Wed 4 Jan, 2006 11:27 pm
Riveting AC. Very Happy Although I get the general picture, it is hard for me to grasp the actual meaning right away. But, 'For reasons best known to them' right? I'll read again anyway.
0 Replies
 
askchester
 
  1  
Reply Fri 6 Jan, 2006 07:17 pm
its a memory of birds eating the seeds planted in the field
dropping low and rising like a glider over thermal winds
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

What inspired you to write...discuss - Discussion by lostnsearching
It floated there..... - Discussion by Letty
Small Voices - Discussion by Endymion
Rockets Red Glare - Discussion by edgarblythe
Short Story: Wilkerson's Tank - Discussion by edgarblythe
The Virtual Storytellers Campfire - Discussion by cavfancier
1st Annual Able2Know Halloween Story Contest - Discussion by realjohnboy
Literary Agents (a resource for writers) - Discussion by Craven de Kere
 
  1. Forums
  2. » to johanna
Copyright © 2025 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.04 seconds on 05/01/2025 at 09:38:17