My Only Failure

Here's the rewrite. Im still open to making changes, so crit as much as u like. Enjoy. btw. srry theres not many changes. ive been having trouble getting crit for it. (changes in caps)

My Only Failure

Verse 1

It looks like I've fallen
Off the steepest cliff
And into the arms of failure
Isn't there more to living
Than just merely existing
And letting everyone down

Chorus

How will I make it
In the eyes of the World
If my only success has been failing
In YOUR eyes

Verse 2

I KEEP ON DOING EVERYTHING WRONG
Keep on getting screamed at
But what if I change that
And become just what you want me to be
Would you see me then
As more than a failure

Bridge

I'll climb back up the steepest cliff
And cling to it for my life
As I face the world
Being just what you want me to be
Following in the steps you've taken
Without glancing at the path left behind

Chorus

Have I just made it
In the eyes of the world
Have I finally failed at failing
In YOUR eyes

Verse 3

What TO DO now
I don't feel like myself anymore
Maybe I liked living to fail
I guess it was better than this
I guess my only failure
Was not being true to myself