here is a poem i made 4 school, is it good enough? *note* im new at this poetry thing
O!
the war is over the battle won
murtagh was taken when the day was done
there must be a new leader for the vardone
this ofcourse is a burdun!
nasuada was appointed this task
Eragon accepted with out a mask
telling the varden was a chore
all were hapy except for 4!
roran the only cousin of Eragon
lost his one and only farm
heard tales of a new rider
but dissmised it and drank some cider
Tyhe ra'zac came after him
and caused carvahall suffering
whats the strangest thing?
its because hes wanted by the king
drive them out of town they did
they were beter then capti kidd
then the Ra'zac commensd attack
but they could fight worth jack
O!
As orik asked Eragon
to join the clan Ingeitun
it made him feel really numb
because he had to cut his wrist
Off to the elf city
with an elf who eragon thought was pretty
in a dark tunnel they all go
with nothing but ther swords and bow
now i end this tale to talk about another male
Roran change carvahall into a barracks
the healer constantly had to use serax
alll the women and childern in the Spine
with little food and wine
all they had were the cover of the pines
through the door the Ra'zac went
they didnt even half to pay a cent
then with a evil shove
they took Rorans only love
The butcher named sloan
hesa traiter to the bone
off to Surda they all go
will they make it alive?
i dont know
they travel to the city Ellesmera
wich is very far-a
they then see the land of of elves...
i bet you say to yourselves
what happens next?
you pick up the book and read the text
*whew* this is from the book Eldest you propably would only get it if you read the book
well tell me what you think, say your true opinion