gvapid
 
Reply Tue 15 Apr, 2003 12:25 pm
Victim #1

As I have clung to you in times of need,
a constant friend to see me through bad times.
Your ev'ry word was dear and I would heed,
but you left like a winter snow sublimes

Somebody I thought you would never be,
a Judas within an unlikely source.
Your latex covered hands are strange to me.
The hands I held now grip mine with such force.

The eyes that saw inside my very soul,
peer at me through a metal microscope.
The ones I thought I'd trust till I was old,
are now my killers and my hanging rope.

You poke at me in hopes that you'll create,
an alternate and perfect human race.

(I bet the poem wasn't what you thought Laughing )
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MisterEThoughts
 
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Reply Sun 20 Apr, 2003 12:50 am
hey this was def beautiful no doubt keep dropping i will keep reading promise
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gvapid
 
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Reply Sun 20 Apr, 2003 09:33 am
Thanx MisterEThoughts. I really appreciate your comments. Very Happy
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mr trips
 
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Reply Sat 10 May, 2003 08:19 am
Another unignorable piece.

I think you really don't like hospitals.
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gvapid
 
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Reply Wed 14 May, 2003 04:04 pm
I wrote the poem b/c I was inspired by the GENETSCISM story.
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