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Mon 19 Dec, 2005 05:29 am
LOVE'S MASQUERADE
by Robert Davidson
I ran along the dark-shored lake as
A magpie in a blue gum sang a mystic melody.
But so afraid was I to unmask my heart
And share with you my love's wond'rous rhapsody.
To me the world was frailer than a dream
And I like a grotesque shadow dancing on the wall
Was filled with broken songs of the might-have-been
While pretending to be what I was not at all.
Across the waters two magpies were
Loving in a slant of sunlight. And in my soul I cried:
'Please take me out of myself, unveil my heart,
Sing me the magpie song of love,' I gently sighed.
So shy was I to show my love,
Just like a cloud that hides the blue.
I kept my love locked up inside
Like cobwebs masking the rose's hue.
But you told me my love I must not hide,
And rowed across the water in your boat, so very bold,
To take me in love by the lake. And when I woke
The magpies' fluting notes were liquid gold.
Copyright 2005
Robert, This is a truly good poem and I feel what you are saying. You might try a couple of commas in the right place so that the reader can get the full impact.
example: "...and I, like a grotesque shadow dancing on the wall,....."
Just curious. What inspires you?
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