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Just some thoughts

 
 
flushd
 
Reply Fri 16 Dec, 2005 08:22 pm
Just some thoughts

It's the way you shave your face
old fashioned soap
a ticklish brush
painting with exquisite joy
onto the map of your skin

A man can not feel
with the heart of a woman
The charcoals burning evenly
inside my broken body

It's the way you laugh with your flesh
rippling the air all around you
a few back hairs
black coarse
left to grow their way

The greatest gift I have ever known
I can hurt here
I can love here
bent over the sink spitting out toothpaste
unconcerned with my worn nightshirt

It is more than I have ever known.
It is my home.
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CrazyDiamond
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2005 12:40 am
Beautiful.
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Deler
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2005 02:34 am
I prefer two L's
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2005 01:20 pm
LOL.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sat 17 Dec, 2005 07:54 pm
nice description
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flushd
 
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Reply Thu 22 Dec, 2005 01:16 am
thank you.
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flushd
 
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Reply Thu 22 Dec, 2005 03:17 am
Limited Shelf Life

Horse meat
you are
slipping on your own juices
uttering syllables
no one is listening
you pretend he is listening

Poured skin
you do
apply mascara in clumps
casually oblivious
no one is mentioning
you insist he is understanding

All sisters
you see
buttering thighs in tights
sinfully delicious
no one is repenting
you think he is elavating

Little girl
you know
the pulsing behind the tissues
beautifully preposterous
no one is watching
you see he is gastrating

Dime bags
you buy
paper plates and napkins
childishly delightful
no one is tasting
you feel he is dreaming

You are much more
than this
limited shelf life
you believe in.
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