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Reply Wed 14 Dec, 2005 05:34 am
Insecure

Maybe she lookd at me because she was not noticed
by me, others or even people she thought were closest
I toast this to all bachelors, battlers of self importance
people who struggle relentless for there kins next forgiveness
I live this life of interpretation: others conditions
maybe i should reflect the broken mirror and see other angles within this?
interested? or can we all relate in other words...
it's like an aimless path with no restrictions but contoured curves.

I was looked at because she was insecure
Is my summary pretend or just pretentious?
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Reply Fri 16 Dec, 2005 05:33 am
hey slip i we both share a passion for poetry
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