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'Too young'

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mc slipperz
 
Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2005 03:08 am
they were too young to care

He whispered a whistle subtle beyond his wisdom
knowing the more reclusive, the more they would listen
like a blank canvas, one beauty spot, clear as day
the rumpus of monkeys; young, swung away
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Thu 8 Dec, 2005 04:29 am
It left me wanting to read a little more.
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