Cola, I took the liberty of reading your poem for our listeners on WA2K radio.
Our virtual station is a mock up of a real radio station, my friend.
We do news, weather, songs, poetry, birthdays of celebrities. occasionally have a fight.
A2K also has a special forum for original writing. That's where I put the poem I wrote.
I don't patronize, my friend, so when I say your poem is good, it's an honest observation.