Reply Wed 16 Nov, 2005 09:20 am
Torn into pieces over you.
Wondering. Waiting. What do I do?
Restless nights and thoughtess days.
As this feeling slowy strays.

Wanting to hold you yet wanting to run.
What happened to nights when we used to have fun?
Now all the happiness turned into pain.
The tears stream harder than rain.

Your voice echoes throughout my mind.
The right words seem hard to find.
Each sentence from you cuts me so deep.
Your soul haunts me till I sleep.

The image of your face stuck in my head.
The words I spoke that I shouldn't have said.
Reality of the situation fades away.
When will it all finally be okay?

My torn and shattered heart cries.
Was our love just full of lies?
So I sit here thinking of you.
Wondering. Waiting. What do I do?
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YTZ
 
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Reply Wed 16 Nov, 2005 11:15 am
hey that what amazing
i liked reading xx
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Wed 16 Nov, 2005 11:42 am
Nice!
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stuh505
 
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Reply Wed 16 Nov, 2005 12:43 pm
It has an intriguingly deliberate and wistful flow to it...very nice
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Crazielady420
 
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Reply Wed 16 Nov, 2005 01:39 pm
Thanks guys... my ex did the wonderful job of inspiring me for it... but it has been so long since i have written anything...
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