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Reply Tue 15 Nov, 2005 03:52 am
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Baldos words for Silvi

Silvi

See me fly like the wind
A form of brown and white against
A wall of different shades of green and blue
My hoofs hardly touch the ground as I run

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I break through the wall of air
As I gallop through the fields
My power controls the space I travel
The world speeds by me

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Silvi

When these images were first created
You were yet to make your entrance into the world
Nestled in your mother's womb safe warm new
All has changed since those images
Each leaf and blade of grass is different for you
Nothing stays the same all is constant
Movement and change like my running


Dedicated to Silvi and Littlek
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Tue 15 Nov, 2005 06:04 am
By the way littlek, my grandmother, and favorite aunt are both named Sylvia.
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ROBERTDAVIDSON
 
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Reply Tue 15 Nov, 2005 02:03 pm
AngeliqueEast,

Your very beautiful word imagery matches the photos of Silvi perfectly.
An exquisite poem enjoyable to read and visualise.

Robert Davidson.
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Tue 15 Nov, 2005 02:10 pm
Why thank you Exclamation Very Happy I do hope Silvi likes it. Very Happy
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littlek
 
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Reply Tue 15 Nov, 2005 07:10 pm
Wow, I like it even more broken up with the photos! This is so sweet.

When my mother heard my sister was naming Silvi, Silvi, she sort of groaned. She'd had bad connotations. I love the name.
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Wed 16 Nov, 2005 02:32 am
Glad you liked it Littlek
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