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My saveing grace

 
 
Deler
 
Reply Sun 13 Nov, 2005 02:22 pm
I'm allready married

My wife is out there, beautifull and loveing as she is
Her pain missunderstood Her problems missplaced Her fear unvanquished Her children unborn

What keeps me going
is that i may fall
i may betray that which is true But i always try

i may fail you
i may go against that which i hold dear however this is not a fault between us
simply plans for a bridge

my guideing light when in the dark
is my future

filled with pain filled with anguish filled with trouble never alone

she has yet to feel my touch

i have yet to experience her sorrow

lets trade fears
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Sun 13 Nov, 2005 09:00 pm
It has the feel of a stream of consciousness poem. You have some great lines.
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Deler
 
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Reply Tue 15 Nov, 2005 12:26 pm
Thank you Angelique Very Happy
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