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Cleansing

 
 
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 01:46 pm
The lack of support and positive energy
I've been growing up with all my life
inspires me today.

Nothing more satisfying
Then the feeling of happiness
Or to them the art of taking it away.

Leave us in this negative shell
Of a life you gave. Impregnate our brains
With mass confusion.

Take away all the good
Send us on our way
This world you taught us to despise.

Not realising how much your words
your actions, your decisions, and your judgement
Affected us, whether presented or not, they did.

You infected us, and now we are left dissecting
Ourselves, cleansing ourselves so we have a chance
At positive happiness, regardless of your ways.
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Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 02:04 pm
Wow, some heavy lines here.
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Reply Tue 8 Nov, 2005 02:36 pm
Thank you AngeliqueEast for taking the time to read and post. Muchly appreciated!
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