1
   

Salt and Fire

 
 
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 09:01 am
A prophetic surrealist dream
In Abstract Form
3/23/04


Salt and Fire


Tongue of flames
Devour the child
White skull shines

Man rubs ointment
To prolong
Life

Mother licks and eats
To return
To the womb

Germinate
Floating
Biomorph

Father stands
By open door
Bright background
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 604 • Replies: 2
No top replies

 
AngeliqueEast
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Nov, 2005 09:10 am
I posted this poem in the wrong section. I have asked that it be moved to the Original Writing section.

Sorry about that, and thank you

{A}
0 Replies
 
AngeliqueEast
 
  1  
Reply Wed 9 Nov, 2005 02:50 pm
Re: Salt and Fire
AngeliqueEast wrote:
A prophetic surrealist dream
In Abstract Form
3/23/04


Salt and Fire


Tongue of flames
Devour the child
White skull shines

Man rubs ointment
To prolong
Life

Mother licks and eats
To return
To the womb

Germinate
Floating
Biomorph

Father stands
By open door
Blinding light




Edited last line to "Blinding light"
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

What inspired you to write...discuss - Discussion by lostnsearching
It floated there..... - Discussion by Letty
Small Voices - Discussion by Endymion
Rockets Red Glare - Discussion by edgarblythe
Short Story: Wilkerson's Tank - Discussion by edgarblythe
The Virtual Storytellers Campfire - Discussion by cavfancier
1st Annual Able2Know Halloween Story Contest - Discussion by realjohnboy
Literary Agents (a resource for writers) - Discussion by Craven de Kere
 
  1. Forums
  2. » Salt and Fire
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.03 seconds on 04/28/2024 at 01:50:12