Poetry Inspires Me!

I like it.

Thank you Gus

I thought this poem had and excellent rhythm and word flow, but I think you had far too many rhymes for my taste.

Robert Davidson.

it made me smile

Thanks Robert, and Deler for your comments.

Hi Angelique,

I was inspired by this poem. It is very visual.

I can understand Robert's comment about the rhyming. In truth, it doesn't need it. The poetic atmosphere alone is excellent - spot on - and made me want to grab a piece of paper and a pen.
I too love rhyming and sometimes it works to use it a lot (for me, anyway), but it also seems to interfer in a way with what I want to say - because it needs to be accomodated.

You have a beautiful way of seeing things and that's much more powerful than any rhyme.

Not that I'm any expert - I just think the rhyming puts too many fullstops in the flow of things - (well something like that)
blimey, I'm useless when it comes to saying what I mean.

If you take away the restriction of rhyme, your writing has a quality that makes me think of artistic visuals such as an oil painting.
Do you paint?

Please write more.
best, Endy

Yes Endy I paint. And I write a lot. I will post more. I also posted some sensual poems in spanish.

Thanks,

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I did look at the Spanish poems. They sound good in my head, but as I don't read or speak Spanish - I found them a little frustrating.

Do you want me to translate for you? It will have to be by em.

Yes please, (if its not too much bother) Angelique.
I'd really like to read them.