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Mon 10 Oct, 2005 11:45 pm
Excellent! This is very well written, and I like it.......keep them coming!!!
What a beautiful piece of writing...I feel a personal connection to it because it so reminds me of someone I know...and lost..and he may never come back for a long time...maybe never come back.
Its sad but appropraite - I'm glad I stumbled upon this.
Superb rhyme scheme! Very well put together, I like it.
Superb rhyme scheme! Very well put together, I like it.
You have a good feel for imagery and form. Keep writing.
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