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Reply Sat 1 Oct, 2005 11:14 am
The guider said to her while yawning like he wasn’t ready for today’s tour:

” Haaah, is there any particular place you want to visit? She said while

looking around surprisingly: “ I didn’t choose to come here, it just

happened and I’m pretty satisfied about it”. He smiled and said:” like what

happened to lovers; one wishes to see his lass in his sleeping and it never

happens. A darling doesn’t come unless she wants to. This is so bad as

you can see”. She nodded and didn’t comment. Her eyes started to ponder

at the different scenes of the weird fantasia’s kingdom.


There was a drear looking fence, and her experiences taught her that

theses fences environ the distinguished worlds of specific writers. She saw

these fences around Shakespeare’s worlds and Disney’s. She knew that

many like these fences circle the worlds of Najeeb Mahfood, Yousif Idris,

Marquis, and others. These fences were built around the preferential

worlds so they won’t mix with the outer worlds, and to cast holiness, and

excellence on the author’s thoughts.
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Reply Sun 2 Oct, 2005 08:08 am
Well, my goodness, navigator. Look what I found. A lovely prose poem about fences. I love the way that you use the "fence" as an environ, honey. I was reminded of Frost's "Mending Wall."
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Reply Mon 3 Oct, 2005 08:11 pm
That is an odd little piece of work...it leaves me speechless.
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navigator
 
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Reply Sat 8 Oct, 2005 12:29 pm
Hi Letty. Hi stuh. I'm back again, and sorry for being late in my reply.

Troubles again.

Thanks for the words, that's so sweet. Are you sure that you are

speaking about me here?! Smile
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