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Wanna leave a shiot relationship?! Here's a note I left.

 
 
flushd
 
Reply Thu 22 Sep, 2005 10:59 pm
OH MY DEAR SLEEPYHEAD

How can I say I love you back?
You never made me happy.

Such a long time.
Such a long time we've known.
Why are you holding on?
Why won't you let me go?
Let me go.
Don't act so beaten.

I've given up that you'll call.
I've given up that you'll try.
I've given up that you know
a damn thing
about me
and why I care.

I leave you in the morning
I won't sit and watch you sleep
I won't allow you to hold me
I won't allow you into my heart.

Don't whine.
I won't buy you breakfast.
I won't cook for you.
I won't be your woman.
I will learn something here:
I don't like this life
that I used to envy so well.

You never listened.
You never grow poetry
You never care about what's going on......
"Umm, but what does this have to do with me?
With the industry? Listen, you aren't around the Underground
the way I know. There is a whole community of people who
don't live like you. They aren't concerned about being fit or
money"

You are ugly on the outside
Because your insides are in revolution
constantly, constantly,
and there is no peace in you!

You are in awe of my muscle
You caress, you love my mind.
Why?!
Because I will not bow to you.

I do care.
I do care about you.

I do not love you.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Fri 23 Sep, 2005 03:12 pm
Wow, did you read into my mind or what? I like it, awesome.....thanks for sharing!

Peace,
Pessy
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littlek
 
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Reply Fri 23 Sep, 2005 03:14 pm
That is one kick-ass poem.
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Endymion
 
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Reply Fri 7 Oct, 2005 03:26 am
Well said, flushd.
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