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Thu 22 Sep, 2005 05:59 pm
Who is this cruel god?
To take my love from me;
The churchyard grass has long since been trod,
Why won't the pain just go quietly?
I wonder if she knows,
Where ever she is now,
How much I need her; it surely shows,
For the pain rests hard upon my brow.
Now I wake everyday
To a world cold, unkind,
And no matter what I do or say
I cannot keep her out of my mind.
It hurts; it hurts so much,
My heart is ripped open,
For the need, so strong, to feel her touch.
It cannot be expressed by this pen.
Oh, such a cruel god is he
To take my love away from me
Very moving and very tragic. Your personal grief comes across in every well-written line in this heartfelt poem.
Robert Davidson.
I can feel this one. In fact, it reminds me of when my mother died.