In My Room

Read my poem, bitches.

What about us sumbitches?
Actually, I like the theme of the poem. I don't like to tell a poet how to write, but it could benefit from a bit of tweaking up.

sumofabitch!

good poem

What kind of tweaking up?

I don't like to tell a poet how or what to write.

Okay fair enough.

It's a celebration, bitch
Yeah, dude, I feel you on that whole smoking caterpillar thing. And it's always nice to have a reassuring room that will trip you out and whatever. I can understand why you need only one bed... but if you're gonna write some mind-bending crap then you've got to make longer pieces, bitch.