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Sometimes people will never realize, Does this sound good??

 
 
Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 05:40 pm
For those lonely nights with nobody to hold, I was there
But you didn't see me
For the times you thought nothing could save you, I was there
But you couldn't hear me
For the times you sat staring at the sky dreaming about love, I was there
But you didn't notice

For the times that my eyes caught a glimpse into your world, I did care
But you wouldn't let me in
For those nights that I cried over the pain you caused, I did hurt
But it didn't phase you
For the times I reached for your hand and you pulled away, I grew weak
But you were so strong

For the talks about how she hurt you, I always listened
But it killed me inside
For the remarks you made when you were angry, I still stayed
But it broke me into pieces
For the time you walked out the door without looking back, I still waited
But my heart couldn't take it

For the last time that I will hear your voice, it will linger in my heart forever
But I just can't take it
For the last time I see your smile, it will leave an imprint in my mind
But it's time to move on
For the last time I'll feel complete, I will be happy
But I'll always be empty inside
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Sun 18 Sep, 2005 05:53 pm
Beautiful!
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Crazielady420
 
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Reply Mon 19 Sep, 2005 05:44 am
AngeliqueEast wrote:
Beautiful!


Very Happy thank you Very Happy
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