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WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE

 
 
Reply Wed 7 Sep, 2005 06:46 pm


WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE

by Robert Davidson

Yours is the heartbeat I yearn to own
As I touch and lightly stroke your red-gold hair;
I almost feel the kiss of you upon my mouth,
But you push me aside, I stand in despair.

Who has loved has lived full measure,
Even tho' the wind sighs like a muted violin.
But when love has no pleasure
The tense strings throb no more.

One starlight night I thought to steal a kiss.
To bend your will to mine, my single goal;
But a waning moon stared icily down,
'Cause hurting you was like fighting my soul.

Who has loved has lived full measure,
Even tho' the wind sighs like a muted violin.
But when love has no pleasure
The tense strings throb no more.
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CalamityJane
 
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Reply Wed 7 Sep, 2005 09:07 pm
Very nice - I like your poem.
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Wed 7 Sep, 2005 11:18 pm
Beautiful!
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Thu 8 Sep, 2005 10:22 am
I like it
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pragmatic
 
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Reply Tue 11 Oct, 2005 10:37 pm
Re: WHEN LOVE HAS NO PLEASURE
Its a very appropriate poem for me again, except that I wish

ROBERTDAVIDSON wrote:
As I touch and lightly stroke your red-gold hair;


was talking about dark brown hair...that would personalise it for me...
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CrazyDiamond
 
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Reply Thu 13 Oct, 2005 08:17 pm
Great comparison between the violin and love without pleasure. Nice poem Very Happy
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