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A Perfect Scene

 
 
Ray
 
Reply Fri 2 Sep, 2005 12:50 am
In my dream once we walked together,
among the green landscape of the park,
on a pleasant road that leads nowhere,
but somewhere we walked and talked,
and that's all we ever wanted to do.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 3 Sep, 2005 04:23 am
Good morning, Ray. I really enjoyed the simplicity of your poem, my friend. Quatrains are not always easy to write.
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Sat 3 Sep, 2005 05:00 am
I really enjoyed your quintet poem, well written.

http://www.poetryexpress.org/tips/stanza_breaks.htm

http://www.ourkarnataka.com/Poetry/aparna_quintet.htm
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Ray
 
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Reply Sat 3 Sep, 2005 04:15 pm
Thank you friends. Very Happy
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