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Prom Night, And Cold Sweats

 
 
Reply Fri 26 Aug, 2005 09:32 pm
I'm not always gonna be able to give you what you want
Sometimes i'll try, try and try yet **** it all up..
But I love you and thats all that matters.
So I fucked up the one thing you wanted.
I'll give you what I can and make it all I can to be better.
Help me make this a night to remember..
So I'll turn the lights down
And turn our song on
Dance with my till it's all over..
Take me in your arms
I messed up this time, so heres my sorry

Here you are in my arms pretending like you don't care
Here I am telling you everything in my heart
Let me try to make this all better,
Let me lead you this one time
Follow me in this twirling embrace
The lights sparkle and mesmerize in your eyes.
The twinkle in your eye has caught my own
Lost so deep in your deep green eyes
These are the moments that last forever
These are the days that should never end
These are my hopes and dreams
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Fri 26 Aug, 2005 09:44 pm
Cool...I can relate to some of that....Good one...
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tear jerked punk
 
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Reply Fri 26 Aug, 2005 09:47 pm
Arrr! A vast ye matey! The most of it was wrote because I got depressed because I promised someone i'd go to prom with them and I got really sick that day, and the night before I promised my gf a dance in the tux but I was to sick so I just gave her a little suprise, and it was when me, her and another couple(my close friends) came back to my house and the 2 girls still dressed in their prom gowns got their dance, but it was opposite clothing, and I wrote a poem about how I felt and stuffs..
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Sat 27 Aug, 2005 10:08 am
I like that. It's not particularly profound or moving... but it touched a little part of me. I almost wish someone I know would say that
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