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Reply Wed 24 Aug, 2005 05:15 pm
faces blur into photographs,
forever holding on to a single moment,
oh, i desire those moments back,
I wish i could turn back time and undo things i have done,
do things i still wish to do but dare not too,
i wish to be free of my own self restraints,
bound by society and its sniffing stereotypes,
all crying out for the same goal i had hoped to achieve,
freedom from being bound by our loved and cherished society,
i wish..
i wish...
i wish to be someone..something worth anothers while,
worth their time, effort, and love.
oh, how i long to hold that feeling again.
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Reply Fri 26 Aug, 2005 02:03 am
Cool, I like it....I really liked the line "I wish to be someone...something worth anothers while"...Keep writing.....
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