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Sat 20 Aug, 2005 07:18 pm
Tonight is a fight night
Its a fight with the inside
And those old memories
They're slowly winning out
As the demons rattle the chains
Now they shake the cage
Screaming with rage of being keep away
They're diein to get out
Soon the soul is crying out
From all the things its tried so hard
To forget about
Here they come now the demons
My sins the ones locked with in
Just wont stay down wont stay dead
And I know I'm one of the damned again
The way its always been
I give in again and let the demons in
The strength to fight has long senesce left my mind
My heart and my soul still say no but to the demons
Its just a sweet sound that will slowly die down
To a whisper just a crimson melody to the victor
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thoughts please
Vex, your last stanza evokes the best imagery:
I give in again and let the demons in.
The strength to fight has long since left my mind.
My heart and my soul still say no but to the demons,
It's just a sweet sound that will slowly die down
To a whisper; just a crimson melody to the victor
If you will notice, I corrected some of your errors because it makes the poem flow better.
Keep it up, my friend!
?????. er, Deler, welcome to A2K, but that post just threw me for a loop.
Vex put what I was feeling into words and it helped
Well, how about that. See, Vex. You're helping someone to identify. <smile>
ah you know me Miss Letty i always have some kind of spelling error
or something in my writting.
Deler happy it helped and those nights always come to a end at some point.
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