Time & Fruit (another short poem - please critique harshly!)

grrr!

colour and taste, I had yellow for breakfast and red for dinner but I had crimson for dessert.

Did you now?

Time and Fruit
Wow, I really liked this. The images stick with me. Grabbing at those yellow bananas. God, I guess that's all we do in life basically, from young to old. Forgive me if I got the meaning wrong. I encourage you to write more. Although, if you sum up life this beautifully and simply, what more is there to say? I really liked your poem. A great poem I think.

agrote,
I printed out your poem. It's just so great - although reading it aloud, I liked the first paragraph better - but it is still great.
By the way I am S. Grote. Related poets?
I'd really like to hear your own thoughts on your own poem here.

Great first impression, It doesn't mean a damned thing the second time through and I don't think I understood it the first time but it still meant something

It's about sex.
Glad you all liked it.

S. Grote is an unfortunate name.