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Thu 4 Aug, 2005 12:44 pm
WOW! i just bought an external floppy drive, i didnt have a floppy, so for the past two years ive been finding all these old disks and had no idea what was on them.... my old writings! *whew* i thought they were lost.
Here, go ahead, take a look at a few.oh wow... i forgot about this one...... its a bit lengthy, dont choke.*sigh* oh the days when chaos was so simple. but then again, i suupose later i will see these days with the same light.
Re: I found some old writings.
BreatheThePoison wrote: youre in there some place
lost inside my head
dangling by wires
just beyond what i forget
........
there where its dark
and loud
lost inside my head
Breathe, if I were teaching creative writing, that poem would land you a juicy "A"! Excellent portrayal of a lingering memory (and the smoke-trace feelings of love?).
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